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Title: The New Style
Fandom: Hawaii 5-0 (2010)
Pairing: Steve/Danny
Rating: NC-17
Spoilers: A little for the first episode
Disclaimer: Not mine, not for profit
A/N: Thanks to [livejournal.com profile] slashyme for the quick look over.

Summary: Danny. Steve. The aftermath.


Quick show summary for the non H50 watchers on my flist: This is Steve and Danny.




Together with some other GQMF's they fight crime in Hawaii. Steve is uptight and a little psychotic. Danny (with the tie) likes rules and will yell them at Steve while Steve looks at him, an adorably confused expression on his face. In other words they are gay gay gay for each other and it's the best show of the fall season.





The New Style

Danny murmured a protest as fingers trailed down his back. He cracked one eye open and glared at Steve. “If you’re hard again I swear I’m going to check your medicine cabinet for some little blue pills.”

Steve smirked and Danny groaned when the fingers on his back reached his ass and circled his hole. He squirmed a little, then froze as Steve frowned and the fingers disappeared. “Sore?”

Danny nodded and closed his eye. “Yeah, well it’s not like I do this a lot.”

Since there was only silence following his reply he opened both eyes and saw Steve staring at him, a weird look on his face.

Danny frowned. “What?”

Steve’s expression got even weirder. “What don’t you do a lot?”

Danny rolled his eyes. “Getting a blow job from my partner? Giving him one? Letting you fuck me? Take your pick.”

Steve propped his head up on his elbow and studied Danny. “Have you ever had sex with a guy?” Danny opened his mouth and Steve interrupted. “Besides right now, have you ever had penetrative anal sex with another man?”

Danny felt his face go hot and knew it was red. “I hate when you talk like that. It‘s like talking to a thesaurus.” Unfortunately his distraction technique needed a lot of work. Danny blamed Steve and the sex they’d just had as the reason his brain couldn’t come up with something better.

Danny grit his teeth as the look on Steve’s face turned smug. Steve moved closer and whispered, “I popped your cherry, didn’t I, Danno?”

Danny’s eyes widened and he laughed. “There was no cherry popping! Oh my god, I knew you were insane. I mean you prove me right all the time, but I had no clue you were this crazed.”

Steve held up a hand. “It was your first time! You should have said something.” He frowned again and Danny hated that a concerned Steve made his stomach feel weird. “Was I too rough?”

Danny shook his head. “No and it wasn’t my first time. I’ve like, put my fingers inside and everything!”

Steve gave him a skeptical look. “Anything else? Did your ex put her fingers inside, use a strap-on?”

Danny didn’t know exactly what expression was on his face but whatever it was, it made Steve laugh and make some weird hooting sound. Danny smacked him on the shoulder. “No, she didn’t do any of that!”

Steve nodded in that know-it-all cockiness of his and said, “Then I was your first.”

Danny lay his head back on the pillow. It smelled faintly of detergent and whatever Steve used in his hair. “Not a big deal, okay?”

Steve snorted and the bed moved as he got up and went into his bathroom. “It kind of is, but don’t worry, I not going to give you flowers or ask you how much you liked it.”

Danny rolled over on his back and winced. His ass hurt. “Well, thank god!”

Steve kept talking although Danny couldn’t see him. “I mean, I heard how much you liked it and it’s a good thing I don’t have any close neighbors, cause you, Danno, are a screamer.”

Danny watched warily as Steve came back into the room with a washcloth. He studied Danny in a particularly possessive way and Danny realized he’d seen that same look for the past few weeks. Steve made a ‘turn over’ motion with his hand.

Danny shook his head. “Oh no, no, you are not going to examine me.” He got up because he knew this was a battle that needed to be fought on his feet. “I can take care of myself.”

Steve cocked his head to the side, crossed his arms across his chest and smirked. “Okay.”

Danny walked slowly to the bathroom, while Steve looked up at the ceiling, his mouth twitching with barely suppressed laughter.

As soon as Danny got in the bathroom he muttered, “See if I let you fuck me again, you smug bastard.” He turned on the faucet and grabbed a washcloth. Steve’s voice from the other room proved the man had ears like a bat.

“Oh please, you were begging for it.”

Danny turned off the water and yelled. “I do not beg!”

Steve yelled back in a crappy New Jersey accent. “Oh! Oh! Yes! Right there! Harder! Yes! Please! More!”

Danny washed up and tried not to laugh. He had no clue what he’d said. He’d been focused on Steve’s dick introducing itself enthusiastically to his prostate. Then there were firecrackers and white lights behind his eyelids. A frigging marching band could have marched through the bedroom and he wouldn’t have known.

Steve stuck his head around the bathroom door and said, “Everything okay?”

Danny barely restrained the urge to stick his tongue out at the other man. “Yes. I’m fine. Your big strong penis didn’t hurt me, okay? Sheesh, go lie down before I smack you.”

Steve laughed. “That’s domestic violence.”

Danny snorted and followed his partner back into the room. “Please. The cops saw you put me on my knees that first day. You think any of them would come out here on a domestic?”

Steve was still eying him like he could see through skin. For all Danny knew the man had x-ray vision.

Steve flopped down on the bed. “You mean because right after that you punched me?”

Danny lay down on his stomach. He wanted a nap but who knew Steve would be a talker? He answered his partner’s question.

“Yes. I mean you really didn’t give me a choice. I couldn’t go out like that. It was a respect thing.”

Steve nodded and yawned. “Yeah, I got that. That’s why I let you have it.”

It was on the tip of Danny’s tongue to argue that Steve hadn’t let him ‘have’ anything but that would lead to more arguing which might lead to more sex because Steve was weird and apparently used arguing as foreplay.

Danny frowned. That actually explained a lot. They’d been arguing about football versus baseball and then there were hands in new places and blowjobs. It’d been wild. Now here they were and Steve was flipping channels and not talking so Danny yawned and let it go. He planned to bring it up tomorrow and see if he could get another blow job.


End.


Bonus music download! Two songs from the show. One of which was in The Loser's movie promo so I can tell myself I didn't just buy the song because it's the love song of Steve and Danny. Sheesh, i'm in deep.


Song 1: 'Don't speak'

Song 2: 'Sinister Kid'

Date: 2010-10-18 02:17 am (UTC)
angelus2hot: (Moonlight Mick tongue porn)
From: [personal profile] angelus2hot
Hee!

OMG, this was PERFECT!

I love how well you captured the embarrassed Danno and Steve being well Steve just goes without saying :)

Date: 2010-10-18 04:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kelly-girl.livejournal.com
STEVE MAKES SMUG HOT.

Glad you liked it. Thanks for commenting!

Date: 2010-10-18 02:27 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] huntress69.livejournal.com
I so loved this and I got quite a giggle out of it, starting with -

“Besides right now, have you ever had penetrative anal sex with another man?”

Danny felt his face go hot and knew it was red. “I hate when you talk like that. It‘s like talking to a thesaurus.”


Now why do I not have any problem hearing them have this post-sex conversation in my head LOL.

Great job!

Date: 2010-10-18 09:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kelly-girl.livejournal.com
Thanks!

Steve likes to use big words. Using six words when one will do turns him on.

Heh, now I want fic where Danny says something long and complicated and trips Steve's trigger.

Date: 2010-10-19 01:11 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] huntress69.livejournal.com
You can make it a companion piece, subtitled "The one where Danny makes use of his word-a-day calendar" LOL.

Date: 2010-10-19 03:18 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kelly-girl.livejournal.com
Ha!

*Goes to look up word a day calendars*

Date: 2010-10-18 02:41 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] emocezi.livejournal.com
Oh God yes. You got it, the whole Alpha-male-arguing-as-foreplay-thing. I'm so happy. ;_;

>:D

Fantastic darling. Absolutely fantastic.

Date: 2010-10-19 03:21 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kelly-girl.livejournal.com
Thank you! When they started arguing in the very first episode I was like "ooo!"

Date: 2010-10-18 02:54 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amycoolz.livejournal.com
This was awesome. XD I love the bickering these two do, and this. This just showed more of it and was epic.

Also: A frigging marching band could have marched through the bedroom and he wouldn’t have known.
L.O.freaking-L. In my mind, for some reason, a marching band like the one from How The Grinch Stole Christmas paraded through my head as Steve was fucking Danny on the bed. Complete with that little animal thing that pops out of the tuba playing a trumpet. XDDDDD

Date: 2010-10-19 03:22 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kelly-girl.livejournal.com
I cannot stop laughing at the Dr. Seuss reference. Mostly because I have a dirty mind and keep thinking about the line where his heart grows two sizes bigger or something. Yeah, something of Steve's was growing all right.

Date: 2010-10-18 03:06 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tiki-92090.livejournal.com
OMG I LOVE THIS. I MEAN I SAW THE SLASH, BUT YOU JUST PERSONIFIED IT BEAUTIFULLY AND...AND...STEVE SAID, "DANNO!" AND I JUST LOVE THESE LINES MOST OF ALL:

"As soon as Danny got in the bathroom he muttered, “See if I let you fuck me again, you smug bastard.” He turned on the faucet and grabbed a washcloth. Steve’s voice from the other room proved the man had ears like a bat.

“Oh please, you were begging for it.”


AKA I LOVE YOU AND YOU NEED TO WRITE MORE!!
THANKS FOR WRITING!

Date: 2010-10-19 03:23 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kelly-girl.livejournal.com
I'm glad you liked it and commented. They make a lovely couple and I hop to write more.

Date: 2010-10-18 07:56 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bm-shipper.livejournal.com
This was awesome =D I loved every single word of it =D

Date: 2010-10-19 03:24 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kelly-girl.livejournal.com
Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it.

Date: 2010-10-20 11:23 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lillyg.livejournal.com
Yay! First time!

Date: 2010-11-02 01:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lillyg.livejournal.com
Second time I read it, and it's even better :p

Date: 2010-10-21 08:07 pm (UTC)
spikedluv: (ai: kris&adam - boyfriends by ravenclaww)
From: [personal profile] spikedluv
Awesome! Loved the last line. *g*

Date: 2010-11-04 04:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kelly-girl.livejournal.com
Thank you!

Do you have any H50 bunnies? I know you'll do them justice and we need more writers in this fandom!

Date: 2010-11-04 04:12 pm (UTC)
spikedluv: (ai: kris&adam - boyfriends by ravenclaww)
From: [personal profile] spikedluv
No, I don't. Sadly (or not so sadly, depending on your perspective *g*) all of my bunnies have been hijacked by Kris and Adam.

(Though, if I find any, I'll send them your way. *g*)

Date: 2010-10-25 01:48 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] silentflux
LOL, I so see this! It was so very them - wonderful characterizations and pov :) And thanks for the songs!

Date: 2010-11-04 04:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kelly-girl.livejournal.com
You're welcome! I love them and their bicker as foreplay fun they get into.

Date: 2011-02-11 12:06 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] theeverdream.livejournal.com
Oh wow, that was really hot :D

Познавательный блог

Date: 2011-06-09 02:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] purdumvebaj.livejournal.com
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