Woah! I saw 'part two' on this and wondered how the hell I'd managed to miss part one. I didn't even bother to scroll down some more, I just went through your tag and found part one. It wasn't until I'd finished reading that I realized you just posted it in 2 parts. *G*
This was scorching, girl! and not just a smut-a-thon like one would think from the description. There's a nice meaty little plot in there.
I love the way you kept the 'heroes' premise and just turned it sideways a little. I also loved the way you brought out the ruthlessness, not only in Nathan, but in Peter, too. Sure, Peter was a fuzzy puppy at the beginning of the series, but it didn't take him long to find his inner tough-guy. I do believe that if it came down to it, Peter could be much more ruthless than Nathan. Nathan doubts himself (if only to himself) too much. Peter is actually very determined in his convictions.
And did I mention hot? Yeowzah! The first night between Peter and Nathan with Peter all fucked out by the johns and half asleep? Oh shit, that fried a few circuits!
Might I dare hope that there'll be a continuation of this?
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This was scorching, girl! and not just a smut-a-thon like one would think from the description. There's a nice meaty little plot in there.
I love the way you kept the 'heroes' premise and just turned it sideways a little. I also loved the way you brought out the ruthlessness, not only in Nathan, but in Peter, too. Sure, Peter was a fuzzy puppy at the beginning of the series, but it didn't take him long to find his inner tough-guy. I do believe that if it came down to it, Peter could be much more ruthless than Nathan. Nathan doubts himself (if only to himself) too much. Peter is actually very determined in his convictions.
And did I mention hot? Yeowzah! The first night between Peter and Nathan with Peter all fucked out by the johns and half asleep? Oh shit, that fried a few circuits!
Might I dare hope that there'll be a continuation of this?