Hooray for AUs! And for the boyz selling themselves! I like the dynamic between Peter and Nathan: it's very them, just them in the way they would be if their lives were just this fucked up. And I like the way you've worked in other characters, like Candice liking to dress up, and the Haitian being all bad-ass and silent. Heh heh. Sylar being the guy who's obsessed with Mohiner was a great twist.

A few parts I especially enjoyed:

He knew Nathan would find every bruise and run his hands over them, as if his touch erased all the ones made earlier in that hotel room. And this: Nathan moved over him and Peter heard him whisper, “I take care of you, don’t I?” Nathan is always protective of his little bro!

“It’s a long story. Suffice it to say my brother is very stubborn and if he weren’t working for me, he’d still be working. This way I know where and when.” Poor Peter had a hard life! But that's Nathan's practical approach to things.

Peter stared back, then raised one eyebrow. “Did you want a tip?” Ha ha!

And of course, this: He sat a plate in front of Nathan and grunted when Nathan pulled him down onto his lap. “I’m not that little anymore.” “Yeah, but you occasionally like to sit on me." Hilarious!

I'm very much enjoying this, and now I'm off to part two!