Well done! You know, I was wondering what kind of revenge Nathan would take that wouldn't result in Peter regarding it as a breach of faith/his fault, and this is perfect.
Also, go you with a believable description to an attempted rape. It always annoys me if fanfic (in all fandoms) uses this as an intro to a sex scene. Since I think the last thing after nearly being raped a person would want is to immediately have sex with someone else. Or for that matter that the third party would respond to hearing about it by being turned on instead of wanting the almost rapists painfully dead and wanting to comfort the victim.
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Also, go you with a believable description to an attempted rape. It always annoys me if fanfic (in all fandoms) uses this as an intro to a sex scene. Since I think the last thing after nearly being raped a person would want is to immediately have sex with someone else. Or for that matter that the third party would respond to hearing about it by being turned on instead of wanting the almost rapists painfully dead and wanting to comfort the victim.